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Monday, November 14, 2011

Critiques(:

1. Shhh Its A Secret : i think our speaker should have spoken clearer , but overall i think it was good. FIX AUDIO.
2. Ocean Rock Flip book : great concept . could use audio . SLOW DOWN QUOTE.
3. The Void : Music is great , BUT it was really basic .! Video is great . MORE CHALLENGING MUSIC.
4. Move Crew  : Filming was good, except for reading the paper off . i didnt seem professional. editing was AMAZING !    MEMORIZE QUOTE .                                    
5. Cherry Bomb : Great ! Funny ! No story to it .... needs to connect to the quote. ALL ABSTRACT NEEDS A STORY 
6. Crazy Hair : no story . but really great. CREATE STORY.
7.  Motion Hands : No story! no point of musicians if they aren't playing music ! great abstract ! NO COMMON IDEA

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